2015年5月9日雅思写作A类大作文解析(澳洲)

这又是一道墨尔本文波雅思上课讲过的题,也是关于政府投资及艺术类的话题。没有好好准备的烤鸭永远会觉得题目难,扎实的烤鸭永远感觉这题我写过。墨尔本文波雅思现在就解析下这道题:

2015年5月9日雅思写作题目:Governments should focus spending only on public services, not waste on the arts. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

1.审题:

2.同义词:  spend…on/ allocate… to/prioritise…/ high on the …agenda/ concentrate on…

3.素材:

  • art projects should be funded for the following reasons:
  • 1. Art can cultivate one’s aesthetic judgement. If local governments invest some money to art projects, such as museums and galleries, local residents will  have opportunities to access and appreciate the masterpiece displayed there. Over time, some residents may develop an interest in art and become a designer or painter in the future, thereby benefiting the society at large once again.
  • 2. Art projects provide the common people with colorful pastime. Without the museums and galleries, local dwellers might have limited options in their holidays. Wandering around in some natural museums or galleries could be a perfect way for  them to unwind.
  • Should not:
  • limited public money/ urgent priorities(所以的政府投资基本都可以使用)Free medical services and education are a huge drain on the government’s budget.
  • no short-term returns

4. 结构:

5. 动笔:

6.检查:

 

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