2015年1月17日A类大作文解析-噪音是不是就一定要严格禁止?

继2014年考了一次噪音产生的原因及解决方案之后, 2015年1月17日又再次考到噪音的话题,证明社会生活类话题成为近年热门话题。墨尔本烤鸭一定要好好准备。墨尔本文波雅思9分结构范文里最后一篇就是讲噪音的。下面就开始分析:

2015年1月17日A类大作文题目:Some people think that the amount of noise people make have to be controlled strictly,  while others say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish, discuss both views and your opinion.

乍一看 ,噪音肯定要严格禁止的,不能随心所欲的制造噪音。但是仔细一想,有些噪音是无法禁止的,那么,如何显示你的辩证思维呢?

1.审题:what is noise? How to define it?—不同的活动,有不同的噪音级别。

2.paraphrase: noise-annoying-obnoxious-disturbing–decibel

3.

+  Noise needs to be restricted for the simple reason that it exerts a profoundly negative  influence on our daily life. 举例: rowdy drunkards; motorbikes give a sharp and obnoxious noise ; neighbours who are throwing a party;

_ Noise is not always a curse. Without some degree of noise, peace and quiet would not be so precious and would not be appreciated.

_A certain degree of noise is a price we have to pay in urbanization. For example, planes, cars,construction sites. No one would turn back their clock to live a pre-modern life even though the life might be more quiet.

_Some noise is not so intolerable because it is an expression of one’s emotion. For instance, at 12:00 1st of January, so many individuals shout to welcome a year year. In Australian Open, some fans would scream to support their idols ; in some night clubs on Friday or Saturday, many people need to release their pressure and unleash their passion.

 

While we should take proper measures to control noise, it is a sacrifice that modern people have to make and it is an outlet for one’s emotion.一些措施可以建议下,比如:悉尼机场12点之后不起飞降落怕扰民;一定房子建时隔音要达标。

 

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