雅思写作中关于生活和工作平衡的真题不在少数,其中一个分类就是压力相关的题目。压力产生的原因及解决方案,你有什么答题思路
呢?下面墨尔本文波雅思就给大家分享一道雅思写作真题答案。
生活&工作平衡
经济,就业,社交等各个方面的压力是源源不断的,所带来的负面情绪也足以击垮我们对生活的热情和积极性。如何调节心态和降压(relieve the pressure)在本篇中将再次被探讨。
固定搭配包括,
Work-life balanced lifestyle/ways of living
Work-life imbalance
Well-balanced lifestyle
More balanced, Imbalanced
Pursue sth, in pursuit of…
Modern= contemporary
下面我们就先分析一个较接地气一点的减少“压力”的雅思真题:
The reasons of feeling stressed, and what are the ways of solving them?
关于解决问题的句型一定要简洁。同时还要注意同义词的替换。
Stress is a problem that has had detrimental effects on many people’s lives, and there are various factors in modern society that responsible for this. I personally believe that a balanced daily lifestyle and a closer relationship with family or friends is the best solution.
用there are 句型作为topic sentence也是很不错的,准确明了。给出两个理由,句子之间用不同的连词来是文章大意连贯,有逻辑。
There are two main reasons for stress issues in daily lives. Firstly, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce and it urges people to concentrate their efforts on work. As a result, being afraid of being “laid off” or unable to achieve targets, they constantly feel anxiety or irritable. Moreover, many people cannot afford to spend leisure hours playing sports or going on holidays. With time mostly occupied by work and no play, such an imbalanced lifestyle, with time mostly occupied by work and no play, therefore, contributes greatly to the enormous job-related pressure faced by people today.
主体段二,另一个重要的理由需要另起一段来写。给出具有说服力的例子很关键。
In addition, the busy daily routine also diverts people from enjoying chatting with family members or close friends, and this makes the already grave “stressed out” situation even worse. For example, having to deal with personal or social issues alone by themselves, many foreign students always seem under the huge pressure of study and life, especially where there are no one to talk to. The sense of isolation and stress gradually affects their mental health, which in turn makes it highly unlikely to get rid of the stress.
解决问题的方法作为主体段三,不需要太长,这段的句型非常实用(practical)。
In view of such a predicament within communities, urgent steps must be taken. For people who in pursuit of intensive hard work only, a well-balanced lifestyle with more leisure opportunities should be encouraged. For those who rarely communicate with others, regular contact or reunion with loved ones on holidays or other ways of gathering can also make a huge difference.
结尾段,好的句子连连看啊,都是很简单很实用,这里需要注意正确使用好这些句型,是攻克作文的法宝。
In conclusion, contemporary work pattern are stealing people’s spare time, and this along with alienation from loved ones, provides people with no choice but to bear the pressure painfully. To alleviate this problem requires a more work-life balanced way of living and a closer relationship with others to be built.
Work-life balanced lifestyle/ways of living
Work-life imbalance
Well-balanced lifestyle
More balanced, Imbalanced
Pursue sth, in pursuit of…
Modern= contemporary
下面我们就先分析一个较接地气一点的减少“压力”的雅思真题:
The reasons of feeling stressed, and what are the ways of solving them?
关于解决问题的句型一定要简洁。同时还要注意同义词的替换。
Stress is a problem that has had detrimental effects on many people’s lives, and there are various factors in modern society that responsible for this. I personally believe that a balanced daily lifestyle and a closer relationship with family or friends is the best solution.
用there are 句型作为topic sentence也是很不错的,准确明了。给出两个理由,句子之间用不同的连词来是文章大意连贯,有逻辑。
There are two main reasons for stress issues in daily lives. Firstly, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce and it urges people to concentrate their efforts on work. As a result, being afraid of being “laid off” or unable to achieve targets, they constantly feel anxiety or irritable. Moreover, many people cannot afford to spend leisure hours playing sports or going on holidays. With time mostly occupied by work and no play, such an imbalanced lifestyle, with time mostly occupied by work and no play, therefore, contributes greatly to the enormous job-related pressure faced by people today.
主体段二,另一个重要的理由需要另起一段来写。给出具有说服力的例子很关键。
In addition, the busy daily routine also diverts people from enjoying chatting with family members or close friends, and this makes the already grave “stressed out” situation even worse. For example, having to deal with personal or social issues alone by themselves, many foreign students always seem under the huge pressure of study and life, especially where there are no one to talk to. The sense of isolation and stress gradually affects their mental health, which in turn makes it highly unlikely to get rid of the stress.
解决问题的方法作为主体段三,不需要太长,这段的句型非常实用(practical)。
In view of such a predicament within communities, urgent steps must be taken. For people who in pursuit of intensive hard work only, a well-balanced lifestyle with more leisure opportunities should be encouraged. For those who rarely communicate with others, regular contact or reunion with loved ones on holidays or other ways of gathering can also make a huge difference.
结尾段,好的句子连连看啊,都是很简单很实用,这里需要注意正确使用好这些句型,是攻克作文的法宝。
In conclusion, contemporary work pattern are stealing people’s spare time, and this along with alienation from loved ones, provides people with no choice but to bear the pressure painfully. To alleviate this problem requires a more work-life balanced way of living and a closer relationship with others to be built.