BAR CHART–雅思A类小作文和PTE Describe Image对比

雅思A类小作文和PTE Describe Image相似又互异,今天墨尔本文波雅思PTE的小编用一个Bar Chart来分析一下它们的差异,

烤鸭和PTE的考生们自取所需哈^_^

The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.

首先题目中有一个词game consoles,很多同学这个词不认识,但是通过分析句子结构(主谓宾),可以看出这是个名词,表示“电脑主机”。

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Introduction

The bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.

Overview

Overall, we can see that playing computer games is marginally more popular than chatting on the Internet. However, completely different trends can be seen if we look at the specific figures for boys and girls.

Main Body

Boys aged between 10 and 15 clearly favour playing on games consoles over chatting online. According to the chart, while 85% of boys play computer games every day, only 55% chat online daily. Furthermore, the majority of boys play on their consoles for more than one hour each day, and 10% do this activity for four hours or more.

By contrast, girls prefer chatting online. Close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared to about 50% of this cohort who play computer games. Of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.

这种类型的bar chart不仅出现在雅思考试中,在如今的PTE考试中也是屡见不鲜,很多学生很难在25秒钟内分析出应该说哪些点,今天墨尔本文波雅思PTE的小编带大家改写一下这篇雅思文章,让它可以用在PTE考试Describe Image中。

这是雅思前考官的一篇文章,本文用了introduction- overview-main body的结构,在雅思A类小作文中是可以的,但是建议考PTE的学生还是把总结放到最后。

如果你是PTE的考生,你只有40秒的时间来描述上面的bar chart,想一想你应该怎么描述?几句话?

第一句:The chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.(介绍表格)

第二句:According to the chart, while 85% of boys play computer games every day, only 55% chat online daily. (每天男生做这两项活动的比例对比)

第三句:Furthermore, the majority of boys play on their consoles for more than one hour each day, and 10% do this for four hours or more.(男生play computer games时间的对比)

第四句:By contrast, near 70% of girls engage in online conversation and most do so for more than one hour, while about 50% play computer games every day and most play for less than an hour.(每天女生从事这两项活动的比例及时间对比)

第五句:Overall, we can see that playing computer games is marginally more popular than chatting on the Internet, especially for boys.(最后总结,从事这两项活动总比例对比)

所以,对比雅思A类小作文和PTE口语中的Describe Image,我们可以看出,PTE只要用一些简单句描述,对比,保证语言的流利度就能获得高分,大家课后利用老师上课讲的方法勤加练习吧!

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