2014年8月9日雅思真题原创雅思范文–极限运动是否被禁止

Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, but others think the people should have freedom to choose sports activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Earlier this year, an internationally-renowned F1 racer was rushed to hospital and has been in critical condition for a long time after he got seriously injured when skiing in a dangerous mountain. This accident sets us thinking whether the government should introduce some rules and regulations to ban the hazardous sports. While banning the dangerous sports may avoid similar tragedies, it is my firm belief that those dangerous sports, like X-sports(极限运动) should not be strictly forbidden because they can release our pressure and brings about the excitement rarely seen.首段时事导入,用舒马赫的例子,即使考试时舒马赫不会拼写,也可以用其他方式代替。很自然的引出题目中的问题,用hazardous 代替dangerous,进行同义词替换。用While从句让步,表明自己的观点。自然引出下一段。

 

Indeed, dangerous sports pose a potential threat to general public’s lives. Many individuals especially youngsters are immature and like to take risks by taking up some extreme sports without taking sufficient precautions. For example, many teenagers are keen on rock climbing and surfing in dangerous places. Last month a young boy was reported to have been killed by a shark when he was surfing in Sydney. Banning dangerous sports, therefore, may avoid similar tragedies. indeed,的确,危险的运动会对人的绳命造成威胁。过渡句。后面解释主题句。运用举例论证,举出各种危险运动的例子,对考试具体词汇量有要求。注意平时多看时事新闻,在考试中灵活运用。举例不能太长,用简练的语音一句话概括。

 

However, taking up hazardous sports can release participants’ pressure. Modern society is characterized by mounting pressure, and too many people are working around the clock. For example, in order to meet the deadline, many students and employees need to burn midnight oil. For these people, taking some X sports will let off their steam and help them to recover effectively. 转折,讲危险运动的好处,可以缓解压力。注意运用短语动词,显示扎实的词汇基础。

 

Extreme sports also allows many individuals to pursue the excitement which is rarely seen in our everyday life. For example, bungee jumping/ sky diving, which provides participants with unique experiences, is so thrilling and exhilarating that many people are craving for it. 用also不漏痕迹的过渡,危险运动的另一个好处。

一坏两好

Though X-sports may cause some immature youngsters to die in vain, the authorities and the dangerous sport service providers can also take some preventative measures to ensure the safety of the sport, so it is my belief that dangerous sports should not be banned because it can take our mind off the stressful work and unleash our passion. 最后一段总结,危险运动的坏处能够通过权威机构的预防措施得到缓解,好处得以保存,表明自己的观点。

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