2014年5月10日雅思写作大作文范文及解析-男女平分家务?

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2014年5月10日雅思写作题目:Many females are working full time so housework should be divided equally between males and females. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

同义词替换 women/females/  husband/ wife/wives   household chores/ housewife/housewives

agree: time-allocate …to— housewife—shoulder some responsibility

disagree:take ….in account/consideration—family type/composition/husband and wife’s job type

Sex equality has been a touchy issue all around the world.(开头第一句话不需要太长,简介扼要,保证没有错误,不是废话,给考官留下好印象,并慢慢提高考官的兴奋度。) Some people argue that household chores(替换housework) should be equally divided among family members. While this practice may sound fair because females have to allocate more time to their work, it fails to take into account some other factors, like their family reality and the husband and wife’s job types.(首段分析两方面观点,指出其中一方的问题,明确自己的观点。)

Indeed, it sounds plausible that husbands and wives should take their family responsibilities equally. Because full-time females have to devote more to their specific jobs, thereby cutting their time on some family duties, like sweeping the floor, doing the laundry, washing the dishes, and so on.( indeed让步,貌似平分家务很公平,但是。。。下段反驳)

However, (反驳段)some other factors, like husband and wife’s particular job, cannot afford to be overlooked. If a husband is doing some heavy-duty construction work, he will be probably too exhausted after 8 hours’ work to do any housework. Quite on the contrary, if the wife is doing some accounting job in a comfortable environment, she probably should undertake more family chores.

Family reality is another factor that we should take into consideration.(不漏痕迹的过渡) If both the husband and wife are working full time, exhausted after work, then they probably need to hire some professional cleaners to do the job instead. After all, the full-time couple will be financially capable of doing that.

Despite the fact that females have too much job concerns to do all the housework, we should not ignore the family reality and the husband and wife’s specific jobs to decide whether it is impartial to divide family chores between them. It is my personal belief that to undertake more or less family chores is not a big deal as long as the couple love and care about each other.

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