2015年4月18日雅思考试解析-A类-奖励好的还是奖励进步快的?

2015年4月18日A类雅思写作大作文是一道教育类的题目,属于雅思写作常考题型,仅次于科技类出现的频率,今天墨尔本文波雅思就为大家解析一下,这篇文章应该如何写。

A类大作文:教育类:

Some people believe that only students with best academic results should be rewarded,while others  think it is more important to reward  students with improvement. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

今天墨尔本文波雅思就和烤鸭一起分享下2015年四月18日的雅思考试A类大作文题目:

1.审题:最好成绩的学生应该受到奖励还是最大进步的学生应该受到奖励。奖励的评判标准应该是进步与否还是优秀与否。
2.替换:  rewards-prizes-scholarship;  improvement-strides-make great strides、make progress
3.素材:   + students who perform  best academically should be rewarded because this practice will motivate the high-achievers to pursue excellence and accordingly they may stand a better chance to push the frontier of technology. After all, the societal advances are promoted by some elite prodigies in various areas. If those intelligent,talented and industrious students get the rewards they rightly belong, they may have few material concerns and they can focus on the research or study which they are passionate about. By doing so, they are more likely to come up with some original and great inventions.
               _  If students who make the greatest improvements get rewarded, some students may be misled, believing that be at the bottom of the ranking is fine as long as they can make great strides. If everyone thinks this way, the reward cannot serve as an incentive to motivate students to become better.
               Giving awards to those who perform well academically does not necessarily mean students making great strides do not deserve a prize. The students’ teachers and parents may give oral encouragement and praise to them because it is in everyone’s nature to love being exalted. If students are praised genuinely, they may feel proud of themselves and challenge something more difficult and achieve that goal later.
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