2014年12月13日雅思G类作文解析-音乐和艺术课必要性

今天考的G类大作文属于教育类高频考题,正好上周讲课的时候讲过了,墨尔本文波雅思的同学们应该写的还不错,但也有些人要求我再分析下:

G 类大作文:

学校是否需要给音乐课和艺术课 更多的课程时间安排?To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

 

应该:

1.  cultivate one’s aesthetic judgement/purify one’s soul/—例子:Classical music—musical–Mozart

2. relax one’s nerves and students may become more productive in other courses.

 

不应该:

1.  a little bit expensive for some students and the school as well—-反驳

2.  seemingly not related with future employment—反驳

建议:应该多提供一些时间安排,让学生自己决定。

 

G类小作文:建议信,给机场的manager写个建议。

首先这是一个正式信,词汇,短语,标点,句式,称呼都应该是正式的格式。

可能会用到的好词和好的搭配是:

The parking lots are confusing.

No sufficient Road signs.

Put more signs written in other languages.

Free hotel transfer—just like what Melbourne has done—boost the image and reputation—-promote the tourism industry.

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