2015年2月7日雅思G类大作文回忆解析-第一时间

2015年2月7日雅思G类大作文原题又考到了科技类话题,G类大作文原题命中。这个题在墨尔本文波雅思实体班上讲过。今天我们就和墨尔本以及国内内的烤鸭们一起分析下这道题:

题目:Computers have made the world a better place, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

1. 审题—是better place, 注意不要偏

2.  superior place/ technology/

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+  facilitate our life in almost every conceivable way. For example, telecommunication/shopping/reading/information searching… 注意句式: without computers, … would never have been possible.

_  is physically and mentally damaging to us…..has stolen our leisure time. —be addicted to… drive up the crime rate—cause eys strain—举例-每天早晨起床眼睛都很疼

—critical thinking- Without computers, there would still other things that would have be addictive to us.

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总的观点:Nobody would turn back their clock and live a pre-computer life.

 

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