雅思A类小作文-组合图-考官范文

昨天让大家练习的组合图练得怎么样了呢?教你的方法用上了吗?下面给大家分享这道题的考官范例,对比找找自己的差距吧!

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考官范文:

  • The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.(第一段改写)

 

  • It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.(两句话,一句话总结线图,一句话总结表格。)

 

  • In 1900, around 500km³ of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km³, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km³.(描写线图的细节)

 

  • In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil, at 359m³, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m³, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.(描写表格的细节)

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