前几天墨尔本文波雅思给大家分析了一系列雅思话题的思路及范文，这次我们来继续分析一篇有关危险运动（rock climbing, bungee jumping, parachute jumping and sky diving） 是否应该被禁止的话题，题目如下，
雅思写作真题分析:危险运动应当被禁止或监管吗？
Banning dangerous sports? While some people say that people have the right to do whatever sports they like. Discuss both views and give your personal opinions.
首段，危险运动的同义词替换很重要，句型也要多样化处理。
With extreme sports and related activities becoming more attractive, in recent years, the prevalence of people getting involved in such sports game is skyrocketing. While some people may say that people have the right to do whatever sports they like, there are still many who think that these activities are too dangerous and detrimental to people and their health, and therefore should be banned by government. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my personal opinion at the end.
主体段一，topic sentence里需要涵盖这类危险运动所带来的负面影响。不仅是身体健康受到损伤，也会给心理上造成长期的创伤。
Admittedly, given the high risk of getting injured by doing these highly unsecured sporting pastimes, the negative effects incurred should never be understated. With involvement in fast-paced and, sometimes extreme high altitude activities, such as rock climbing, bungee jumping, sky diving. It is not uncommon to see people breaking an arm or a leg. What is even worse, many more people, suffer psychologically in their future life, being afraid of standing high or taking a speedy form of transportation, afterwards.
主体段二，讨论题目的另一面，给出论据支持为什么人们有选择做任何类型运动的权利。
这里有几个理由很实用，分别是做此类运动有释放压力，克服心理障碍，保持身材，强健心脏的功效。
However, although most people are happy with a ban, there are still many who hold the opposite opinion. Firstly, they say that people should be given enough rights and freedom to join whatever activities they like, regardless of their safety rating. After all, whether people are getting hurt or not through doing those dangerous activities are not essential to the general public and just a private matter. Moreover, taking an active part in doing exercise is far better than not getting any. Most people argue that these extreme sports are largely conducive to releasing pressure and overcoming some of their psychological barriers, not to mention the physical fitness and strengthened heart beat they acquire form them.
段尾，用despite 表转折，尽管危险运动有潜在的风险，还是不应该被禁止。然后给出自己的观点即可。
In conclusion, I contend that despite them being such risky activities that have potentially hazardous effects on people and their general-wellbeing, dangerous sports still should not be banned. I believe the choice has to be made by the people themselves, rather than merely a call for a ban.
