2014年11月22日雅思回忆直播及雅思考试解析

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今天考试总结: G类大作文,文波学员赚到了,这是文波老师9分结构范文第一篇!能预测到题目不算什么,能预测到答案才是真厉害!

烤鸭们要密切注意雅思写作的考试动向哦!

墨尔本雅思-雅思回忆直播–雅思写作

A类小作文:两个表格,分别是3*4,三个国家的学生去加拿大留学的数量及变化趋势,及去美国的留学的数量及变化规律

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A类大作文:在线的电子商务的崛起对实体的商店会有影响,positive or negative?

G类小作文:informal,跟朋友商量再办一次party,上次举报party的效果如何,这次有什么新的idea,什么时间碰头商量细节。
G类大作文:gap year 相关,是否应该在上大学之前去旅游游历一下?

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

Taking a year off and travelling around has been popular in many parts of the world. While taking the gap year may help students know themselves and the outside world better, some students may find it is hard to go back to school anymore.(第一段简单朴素,慢慢提升考官兴奋度。同义词替换,简洁,总括全文观点。)

 

Taking one year off and travelling around deepens students’ understanding about themselves.(主题句提取简洁有力)If students stay on the campus for a long time, it may be difficult for them to know their own personalities and preferences.(假设论证) On the contrary, when traveling or working in the gap year, they will normally perform some real tasks or chores, they may have a better understanding about their own taste. (对比论证)For example, a seemingly introverted girl may find that it is her nature and personality to communicate with people rather than doing some repetitive and boring work.(举例论证)主题句后层次论证,文章内容充实,没有空话,论证充分。没有用任何大词,通顺流畅!

 

Taking the gap year also allows the school leavers to be familiar with the society and they may accordingly(注意小的副词的运用)choose a more suitable major when they come back to school. During the gap year, students may wander around or take some part-time jobs so they are exposed to the real society. They may come across(灵活运用短语动词) some industry which, they find,(注意如何使用插入语) is very promising and thus(注意thus的用法)they may choose a relevant major.

 

However, not every student can come back to school. (反方观点)Some of them may forget those theories, equations or principles and find it is extremely difficult to continue their study. Some may find it is embarrassing to return to the classroom because they will be surrounded with students much younger than them. Moreover, some school leavers make a fortune during the gap year so they are reluctant to go back. Even for those unsuccessful, they may not want to waste three or four more years to complete a degree because they need to support themselves and raise their families.

 

In conclusion, although stopping attending universities immediately after graduation from high school may用may这种语气不强的词显示你的客观性contribute to one’s better understanding about themselves and the society as a whole, it may pose a potential danger that some students will never return. It is my personal belief that(很低调的得出自己的结论,不要再用I am fully convinced这种高调绝对的搭配,如果主体段没有说服考官,只会使得考官反感)it should be left with individuals and their families to decide whether or not they should take the gap year.

墨尔本雅思–雅思口语回忆直播–更新中

回忆一:p1你认识邻居不,你家周围方便不,周末干嘛,最喜欢的一天,最不喜欢的一天,如果改变的话想改变什么。p2 describe a time you felt proud of your friend’s successful p3围绕出国的n多问题,只深深的记得,人们来你的国家旅游坏处是什么

回忆二: part 1:姓名 工作 工作的第一天 礼物 你比较prefer什么样的礼物 你会乐意送礼物给别人吗 当你小的时候 你比较喜欢什么样的礼物
Part2 a bit of a friend you want develop.  Who is the friend. What is the habit?
Part3 你认识这个朋友多久了
怎么样的人在学校被定义为成功的
学校会用怎样的词形容一个学生的成功
是学习成绩好成功 还是艺术等其他有所成绩的成功

回忆三:P1 teacher 最喜欢哪个老师,想当老师吗,为什么?colour,房间的墙纸会选择什么颜色?p2 traffic jam P3堵车都有什么原因,路,打车上路需要额外交钱吗?环境恶化怎么办?

回忆四:P1work or study,工作相关,P2 traffic jam P3 建高速路会缓解交通堵塞吗?交通拥挤时自己开车好还是坐bus好?city什么时间容易堵车?市中心的交通情况是会好转还是更差?
回忆五:Speaking Test in Brisbane tdy is as the following section 1:name;where r u from;the opinion about natural places;the teacher I remember and why+do we still keep in touch? Section 2: Describe an app I use;Section 2(Cont) What the app is?How long I have used this app? What influence is from the app? Section 3:How does technology influence us?Is it necessary for technology development? What will technology advance impact/influence our life?
回忆六:Part1 house 和apartment 相关 Which room do you like best? when was the last time you went shopping? Do you think families should always live together? Part 2: an activity to keep you healthy? Part 3: what changes can people do to make their life healthier? 感谢chandler

墨尔本雅思–雅思听力回忆

听力一部分 membership 十题填空
第二部分 旅游线路,6道选择 四个地图题
第三部分 深海潜水艇6个选择 4个matching题
第四部分 印度外包公司的发展情况  改变策略  CEO customer first  employee first   ticket 机制
墨尔本雅思-雅思阅读回忆:
A类阅读:第一篇 生产线上装配东西 很简单
第二篇  不同的建房材料对于房子的影响
第三篇 留学生的思维更有创造力的实验,各种理论,比较难,6个matching题
G类阅读 第一篇true false not givenchildren  活动matching填空: 旧题   买票—成人—路段—预定—reference最后一篇 卡塔尔人在 半岛潜水oyster 挖 珍珠  4000年前  坐船

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