2015年4月18日雅思考试第一时间解析-G类大作文

2015年4月18日雅思写作G类大作文第一时间解析。今天的G类大作文的考了社会生活-身体健康类,与生活贴近。和今天的A类大作文比起来,我们不得不说G类大作文的观点还是比较好想的。这样验证了我们一贯的思路:G类作文基本没有新题,怪题。墨尔本文波雅思的课堂上基本都讲G类考试的原题,但是A类经常会考一些新题,目的就是考查大家的思考能力。

More people are getting less fit and less active nowadays than people in the past, and this may damage people’s health in a long term. What are the reasons? What can can done about it?

1. 审题:  less fit/active

2.替换:sedentary lifestyle/ unhealthy/ passive

3. 素材:  1. modern technological innovations— means/modes of transportation—-luxury cars/limousines-leather heating seat- comfortable sofas-cozy/snug– we walk less.

2. the mass media—Ultra HD TV/3-D-4D/ Holographic lens/ Virtual reality—We become more addicted to the TV programs or movies and become  couch potatoes.

solutions:

1.  The government can encourage the general public to take more outdoor, screen-free activities. For example, having a barbecue, playing soccer or footy and organising a bushwalk can contribute to our health.

2. Infrastructure can be improved to attract more residents to take exercises. For example, more facilities, such as swimming pools, gyms, relaxation facilities can be built in the communities. If there are sufficient gyms, dwellers may work out regularly and go jogging on the treadmill or play with dumbbells available there.

4.  结构

5.动笔

6. 检查

 

墨尔本文波雅思原创

 

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