2015年3月12日雅思大作文解析:Open area上多种树还是多盖房子?

2015年3月12日雅思大作文原题:Some people suggest that it is more important to plant more trees on open area than housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

在空旷的土地上种更多的树比更多的房子更重要。从什么程度上,你同意还是不同意?

延续了周四加考写作题目必怪的原则,本周的雅思写作大作文依旧奇葩。不过看似奇诡背后,扎实的词汇,严谨的逻辑才是考官要看的。下面墨尔本文波雅思就为大家解析下今天的雅思大作文:

 

1. 审题:不要忘了open area

2.同义:build more houses/ residential areas

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+: trees: beautify the environment/provide… with more oxygen/be conducive to one’s lungs/offer woods for various purposes—-bush fire in Australia

breathe in the fresh air/ take a stroll in a woods/community park/     decrease the chance of contracting respiratory diseases, like lung cancer/ pneumonia

—:  housing: ease/alleviate the shortage of houses—offer more affordable houses for the needy—the society more become more stable

strike a balance: depending on specific factors, governments of all levels should have their own approaches.  take many factors into consideration: population density/the severity of the environment problem/ For example, in some metropolitan cities in China, like Shanghai and Beijing, it is absurd to expect the municipal governments to build an equal number of trees.

 

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