Cambridge10全真模拟题雅思写作经典文章解析—有没有必要上大学?

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文波老师就给大家分析Cambridge10全真模拟题,给大家分析它的句子,希望大家可以仿写出类似漂亮的句子。

不俗的导入+对于题目的改写:

The escalating cost of higher education is causing many to question the value of continuing education beyond high school.

 

对于导入的进一步解释,展示了自己强大的词汇实力:

Many wonder whether the high cost of tuition, the opportunity cost of choosing college over full-time employment, and the accumulation of thousands of dollars of debt is, in the long run, worth the investment.

 

这种主题句觉得不是一般中国学生可以写出来的:

These sizable differences in lifetime earnings put the costs of college study in realistic perspective.

 

完美清晰的长难句:

These statistics support the contention that, though the cost of higher education is significant , given the earnings disparity that exists between those who earn a bachelor’s degree and those who do not, the individual rate of return on investment in higher eduction is sufficiently high to warrant the cost.

 

段与段之间不漏痕迹的过渡:

College graduates also enjoy benefits beyond increased income.

 

动词过去分词的娴熟使用:

College graduates enjoy higher levels of saving, increased personal/professional mobility, improved quality of life for their offspring, better consumer decision making, and more hobbies and leisure activities.

 

动词搭配:

Additionally, college attendance has been shown to decrease prejudice, enhance knowledge of world affairs and enhance social status while increasing economic and job security for those who earn bachelor’s degrees.

 

结尾段简练的总结:

While it is clear that investment in a college degree, especially for those students in the lowest income brackets, is a financial burden, the long-term benefits to individuals as well as to society at large, appear to far outweigh the costs.

 

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