2014年11月1日雅思写作回忆及解析A类+G类

今天A类和G类作文都考了找工作相关的问题,其中A类大作文与25日上周考的“工作满意度重要还是铁饭碗重要?”非常相似。所以烤鸭们要密切注意雅思写作的考试动向哦!

2014年11月1日雅思写作

A类大作文:It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed but they do not enjoy。agree or disagree?

 

Disagree

 

+On the surface, it seems plausible. 论证:subsidy/allowance/live on benefits/safety net/ rest—reflect on one’s life—land a decent job.

 

-Disagree: 1. It is human nature to be lazy and dislike any type of job. Even though we may love it at the very beginning, we may lose our interest. 论证+举例

人性是好逸恶劳,什么工作都不喜欢。即使一开始喜欢,后来也渐渐麻木。

2. Individuals, especially those living in the disadvantaged countries need to survive.  他们没有富国如瑞典荷兰的福利,就需要工作raise their family.

 

G类大作文Some people think older employees are more useful to a company, while others believe younger employees are more useful in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

 

  1. 审题
  2. 同义词:employee/worker/staff; senior employees; employees with a life time of experience/ veteran/seasoned—-greenhorn /novice/fledgling
  3. 素材:

老人: 1. Skillful/efficient/productive—-论证—例子:mechanic—engine-spark plug

2. stable/low turnover—论证(loyal-low HR cost)

过渡:The contributions made by younger staff cannot afford to be underestimated.

However, younger employees are no less useful than experienced senior workers to a company/ Age is not always a bonus in a company.

年轻人:more creative/innovative/ not stereotyped

Think out of the box/ break the mould

论证(be accustomed to/be reluctant to change/ get out of their comfort zone)

例子:advertising industry—young employees

  1. 结构

开头导入:Age is considered to be closely related to working experience. While …., it is my personal belief that….

最后观点:Age requirement varies from industry to industry.

  1. 动笔
  2. 检查

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